Tight writing this round. Nice work! No telling where the story's about to go.
I noticed back in The Veldt and again in Stheno that you seem to enjoy using fragments to extend a description. Less commas and more periods. What started such a penchant?
You've done an expert job of pacing the suspense in this story. I'm looking forward to reading the next installment.
Thank you very much, Lily!
Tight writing this round. Nice work! No telling where the story's about to go.
I noticed back in The Veldt and again in Stheno that you seem to enjoy using fragments to extend a description. Less commas and more periods. What started such a penchant?
Thanks!
As for the fragments- I picked it up from Cormac McCarthy and Peter Heller, in The Road and The Dog Stars, respectively. My two favorite books.